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Spinner Dear Author After being discharged this guy is ready to put don t ask don t tell behind him He s loved his time in the military but hated having to hide who he is He s kept his secret long enough C

  • Title: Spinner
  • Author: Ryssa Edwards
  • ISBN: null
  • Page: 198
  • Format: ebook
  • Dear Author,After being discharged, this guy is ready to put don t ask, don t tell behind him He s loved his time in the military, but hated having to hide who he is He s kept his secret long enough Can you give him the happily ever after he deserves Photo Description His Chief Petty Officer s hat is so low over his eyes it completely shadows them Only his strong jaDear Author,After being discharged, this guy is ready to put don t ask, don t tell behind him He s loved his time in the military, but hated having to hide who he is He s kept his secret long enough Can you give him the happily ever after he deserves Photo Description His Chief Petty Officer s hat is so low over his eyes it completely shadows them Only his strong jaw and surprisingly sensual mouth are visible His dark jacket is pulled wide to display that there is nothing under it but a naked, perfectly hard bodied torso, and a pair of dog tags strung around his neck.This story was written as a part of the M M Romance Group s Hot Summer Days event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story.Read the story here or find it in Don t Read in the Closet, Volume 3.__________Genre contemporaryTags gay m m, militaryWord Count 7,021

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    1. ** 2 plain stupid stars **-------------------------"Tell the truth even if your voice shakes."-------------------------The writing in this story was good, I liked the quote binding the story together. It could have been great, but wasn't. I refuse to believe that the tough, skilled Marine, who has risked his life and faced many dangers through his career, would readily be so careless and risk his life in a whole different way and trust a guy he just met a few hours ago to not use a condom. The [...]

    2. As I have been commenting and writing reviews for the Hot Summer Days stories I have occasionally picked out a favorite line or two to quote as a reference point to what I really liked about a particular story. The highest praise I can give this story is to say that it's almost impossible to pick just one or two in a story overflowing with amazing wordsmithing I would pretty much have to copy/paste the entire story here. This is just so eloquently written. The setting of every single scene felt [...]

    3. Holy Crap!!!!! I just found another favorite author. The passion is what held me and kept me. The whole story, though short is filled with passion and I'm not talking about sex. I'm talking about the characters and the story being exclamation points. You feel it. It's fast paced but you totally get it. It's like Winton said “For years, I made life and death decisions the way you made drinks. I know what I want. And when I want it." Tell me, how do you disagree with that?

    4. OMG, I love this story so much I've gone back to re-read it multiple times!!! Every once in a while, a story just strikes that "wow" spot when you least expect it and this one definitely did - edgy, sexy and romantic in a unique way! Winton and CJ - such opposites, but so perfect together. I adored Winton's strength and his whole "mine" philosophy, especially "I don't leave what's mine behind." And CJ was the perfect blend of innocence and wickedness. I'll say it again - LOVED IT! Thanks:)

    5. Wow. I have to admit that was the best story I've read so far! Absolutly brilliant writing and the way you set up the atmosphere you could really beleive you were standing beside them when everything happened. Loved the characters and the story, everything came together just so well. And the graffiti "Tell the truth even if your voice shakes" was the eye of the story that bound everything together. Did I say brilliant?

    6. “Man’s built like muscle was all God had left when he got made,”What a perfect way to describe the OP's photo! You definitely have a way with words - the Himalayan mattress, the plainclothes ninja - all bring perfectly clear mental images with a dash of humor on the side. Can I take Winton & CJ home with me? I loved them and I loved the story. Thank you for writing this story Ryssa!

    7. Wow did not expect this-in the best way possible! It was sexy and sweet in that blunt way you can only be if most of you if focusing on not passing out~"It's your heart that shakes, not your voice." Thank you!!

    8. I did like this story. It was about a man named Winton, who just having left or been dispatched from the military decided that he would finally make his true self known on the outside. He had been making use of rent-boys and found that "diamond in the rough" in one of the ugliest parts of the town he found himself in. While I felt a sorry for Winton (his job in the military really sucked), I had to laugh at the fact that in all the time he spent with the young man he met, he never once told him [...]

    9. Just not for me (view spoiler)[ where the hell are they? The docks where? The whole setting just confused me. They know each other hours. Doesn't even know the guys name. Guy says he doesn't want a condom mc just agrees. They didn't even bother at least saying they were clean and we don't know the guy at all but sure no condom even though mc only has sex with prostitutes who knows what he's got so no condoms No nothing but after one thing of sex and a few hours together they agree to travel toge [...]

    10. Story Prompt: After being discharged, this guy is ready to put 'don't ask, don't tell' behind him. He's loved his time in the military, but hated having to hide who he is. He's kept his secret long enough. Can you give him the happily ever after he deserves?

    11. I can´t exactly pinpoint whybut the story didn´t sit well with me. Maybe it was caused by how everything happened so fast and so a matter of course. Or maybe there was completely different reason. One thing I can say is the writing style wasn´t the reason of my low rating of the story. All in all, I bet it´ll have more than enough fans - not me though.

    12. Sweet story, but there was one moment when I wanted to shout WTF???(view spoiler)[When Winton and CJ have sex, they don't use any protection. Seriously? Tested and trusted partner, ok, I get it, I want it. One night stand with a guy, who I know for a couple of hours Are you out of your mind!? (hide spoiler)]I give 4 stars, cause I can :P

    13. ***Read as part of the free Don't Read in the Closet: Volume Three anthology. Story #4***

    14. I love it. Both characters are very vivid though painted with only few words. I like the instant connection as though after a long long walk they finally found home. I also like the first times aspect of it.

    15. Don't Read in the Closet: Volume ThreeMy Rating System:* couldn't finish, ** wouldn't recommend, *** would recommend, **** would read again, ***** have read again

    16. "I made life and death decisions the way you made drinks. I know what I want. And when I want it. I want you. Forever.”Just lovely. <3

    17. This was written so well that I didn't want it to end. I wanted to see what life had in store for this couple.

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